".attacks, have also helped fuel." might be better. "Additionally" is awkwardly placed there. and the Beltway sniper attacks, additionally have helped fuel debate over gun policies. Gun violence, though, is not a new problem in the United States.Czolgosz shot McKinley with a revolver, and the President died from his wounds eight days later." Ideally, it would read something like: "This (year) drawing by (name) depicts the 1901 assassination of President William McKinley by Leon Czolgosz. Is there a reason why one source per sentence won't suffice in most of the cases? I understand that some of the sentences might necessitate more than one, but why do statements like Most sales to youths and convicted felons take place in the "secondary market". I'm not a fan of the multiple sources per sentence that's present throughout this article.I'll be around on Wikipedia in the next week(s) to address any concerns. stripped out, the article is ~32 kb in prose size. I have copied the article over to my sandbox With references, headers, TOC, etc. While the article is 68 kb, the large number of references account for much of this. It's also gone through extensive copyedits, and peer review. I think that NPOV concerns have been resolved, and the article is now stable. The article is well-referenced, with the highest standards for reliable sources (mainly scholarly peer reviewed sources). The goal with this article is to rise above politics, providing a general overview of the topic, and summarize what research says.
One reason for my involvement on Wikipedia is to work on criminology-related articles. I have worked on this a great deal in the past couple weeks, with significant help from others. 65 South Australian legislative election, 2006.64 Cathedral architecture of Western Europe.52 Cowboys Are Frequently, Secretly Fond of Each Other.
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